Haiku Compilation

Just a couple of Haikus that I wrote today. I hope you enjoy. Please tell me which ones your favorite.

Rock Band

Bass hums to add depth.

Drums keep the rhythm flowing.

Guitar cries message.

 

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Modern Marriage

Dearly Beloved,

We are gathered here today

For a doomed friendship.

_________________________

 

Beautiful Beach Scene

The Sherbert Sunset

Invites dolphins to play with

Feet hanging from dock.

_________________________

 

Loss Of Innocence

Rainbows stop spreading.

Mean lil' kids take teddy's place.

Laughter dates pain now.

Author's Note

Please tell me which one's your favorite.

Reviews

[Voice]

Great Haikus!!!! I love the modern day messages in each of them. I am especially fawned of Rock Band. Great Writes I loved them all!!!

Voice

[Water_the_Sun]

:P i have a couple of these myself:P im new to it, personally..

I like these, they are all very well thought out, and they follow suit, i wanst too fond of the one about dolphins, it lacked something, the others were good, i think the last is my favourite:)

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Very good.! My favorites were Modern Marriage and Beautiful Beach Scene. I liked Rock Band too. Oh well they are all great haikus

[Tanya]

Modern Marriage is my favorite because its funny.
Good job on all of them.

[sisyqueen2008]

i like all of them.they are cool

[[Converse and Aviators]..]

I liked the Beautiful Beach scene. It really has a pretty image that comes to mind when i read it. Good job!


Keep on Rockin'
~Brinsley