The Living Lighthouse

Christian Poem

The Living Lighthouse

 

 

 

The Living Lighthouse

Guides us through the raging storms;

Rests on Heaven’s shore.

 

 

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy!

Reviews

[Lydia]

I really like this piece a lot. You convey so much in so few words, and that is definitely something that is hard to do. The imagery in these three lines is really powerful and sets a perfect picture in the reader's brain. Very well done friend.

Simple, but to the point. You've described a lighthouse perfectly. One minor thing I would suggest that you change, though, is "Rest on Heaven's shore" to "Rests on Heaven's shore" so that the whole Haiku is in the same tense.
Good write.