Foolish guy

This poem relates me. Howa normal man becomes fool when he searches for answers to satisfy his soul.

I am a fool
A bad carpenter's tool
Little dumb on outside
Inside my head I am really cool


I always was serious on my duty
Never have I ever seduced a cutie
I am a son of hardworking man
I am embraced with natural beauty


But it's 21st century they say
Where nobody wants to be a needle in the hay
I am a spiritual guy I know one day
We will all become dead and decay


So I never show off my style
Expensive lawsuit and important file
I am a regular creepy guy
Who breathe in oxigen and breathe out carbon di oxide


Because I am simple and I admire my school
For making me who I am today
I am happy even when I am not cool
And thats what make me a biggest fool.

Author's Note

I know it's lame but it's the same feeling I feel now and then.

Reviews

[Amber Stone]

Antique, thank U and congrats for this amazing poetic delivery! plain and simple written lines into a fantastic rhymes-style, clever topic, clever thoughts so well structured and conceived; and welcome to poetry-world. sincerely, Amber.