Midas

Midas

A Poem by Elise D.
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A simple poem I made for a special someone who picked me up at my lowest.

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I hate my hair.
The hair that I'd pull of stress.
I hate my face.
The face that turns red with sadness.
I hate my eyes.
The eyes that could water in seconds.
I hate my nose.
The nose that got red anytime I cried.
I hate my mouth.
The mouth that runs on and on.
I hate my ears.
The ears that heard what they shouldn't have.
I hate my glasses.
The glasses that made me look dorky.
I hate my hands.
The hands that hurt me.
I hate my arms.
The arms that make me look like a man.
I hate my legs.
The legs that won't stop shaking.

You must be midas. Everything you touch turns to gold.

I love my hair.
The hair that you pet as an act of comfort.
I love my face.
The face you were willing to look at.
I love my eyes.
The eyes that couldn't leave yours.
I love my nose.
The nose that I didn't hide once maskless.
I love my mouth.
The mouth you kissed so many times.
I love my ears.
The ears that were able to hear your voice.
I love my glasses.
The glasses you wore and looked good in.
I love my hands.
The hands that held yours.
I love my arms.
The arms that are able to hug you.
I love my legs.
The legs that could stay still with just your presence.

© 2023 Elise D.


Author's Note

Elise D.
Ignore Grammer Issues (If there are some)
And please leave feedback♥️

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Like Midas touch, this is pure gold.

100

Posted 1 Year Ago


Elise D.

1 Year Ago

Glad you liked it! I was scared on how posting my first poem on here would be😅♥️
I love your poem :)
How could anyone don't

Posted 1 Year Ago


Elise D.

1 Year Ago

Glad you loved it ♥️
Wow... that's so good...

I love it... how you turn the whole thing around...

Yes... love can feel... like Midas touch...

Everything turns to pure gold.

Well done!

Awesome poem!

Blessed be!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elise D.

1 Year Ago

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I really like the concept of change. :) Alot of my poetry have the idea .. read more
The_Ancient_Rock

1 Year Ago

Yes... I agree.

Keep up the good work.

Blessed be!!!

;)

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Elise D.
Elise D.

Houston, TX



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