Questions

Questions

A Poem by Annie29

So many questions, in my mind.

So many answers, I have to find.

I'm away, but not gone.

I'm falling, but still on.

I'm broken, but I'm whole.

I'm dead, but still a soul.

I'm lost, but I'm found.

I'm high, but still on the ground.

I choke, but I chew.

I'm me, but I'm you.

I can never explain,

the hurt, the pain.

It's inside of me,

you won't ever see.

It's a chord, It's a ryme.

It quick, there's no time.

One scream, one shout.

I'm done, I'm out.

© 2010 Annie29


Author's Note

Annie29
There's no real ryme sceme.

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Love it! Reminds me of one I have wriiten before. Excellent!

Posted 14 Years Ago


i don t like rhyming poetry :( ha ha ha

Posted 14 Years Ago


It is very nice and your rhyme is mature and artistic. Well writen!

by the way, you spelled rhyme wrong in the third to last line


Posted 14 Years Ago


I think it's wonderful. Rymes very well an flows beautifully. I like it alot. Thank you. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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