The sparkle of you

sometimes we are able to see more from a distance...

Across the vast waters

I see the splendor of you

in a golden shimmering sunset

chasing the silvery sliver moon

a silent dipping surrender

to the twinkles of twilight

sparkling diamonds scattered

across sprawling ebony skies

 

yes, I see

the magic of you

 

©

 

 

Reviews

[linear]

Such wonder entangled within simple words, give off a warm tender almost embracing glow.

[Wondering Mind]

Loved the alliteration, and shiny body (images) to fit within the title.

[James Paulin]

Insight to the source of all light in bold perspective. Wonderful!

[InkSlinger]

Your words always inspire me.. my long lost muse!!

[J. J. Nightingale]

ok ... I love this ! ... Sometimes distance gives perspective ..

Nice .. Jazzy

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

so beautiful and tender :)
sparkling diamonds scattered
across sprawling ebony skies

Wonderful image , wonderful love

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one, read mine too " QUEST OF LIFE".