Hallucinations of love

seriously?!...no idea where this came from, no idea where it's going...?

Beyond the borders of

silent comprehension

lies illusions of emotion

deeply embedded in a

fleshy soul triumphantly

ruled by an ever hungry heart

in stark contradiction to ominous

predictions of a weary lonely mind

when once again delirium seeps

through cracks in armor to offer

renewed ecstasy, sweet pain

delivered in syrupy concoctions

still craving the devil’s poison

a mighty drug, all the same

Author's Note

please don't ask...I havn't a clue! (Perhaps the muse found some magic mushrooms...?)
I would be interested to hear what YOU make of it.
Thanks!

Reviews

[OT]

very nice!! and to echo Kristina - a toxic love indeed!

nice strong images - a great flow!! I liked!!!

[Poetic Beauty]

This reminds of a toxic love but one you can stay away from. The imagery is quite stunning and the flow is smooth.

[James Paulin]

Second to second
fused into choices,
desire and wisdom
fuel folly and love.
illusions conceive
delusions deceive.

[serpent]

its like a monolgue of a soul... to be honest there are about a thoursand odd thoughts going on in my mind... cant really pin point one as a perfect fit to this piece...hallucinations of love are perhaps meant to be left like this...unguarded and defenseles...the drug may have a window of opporunity to create magic then

[JelliFyshKissUs]

I second Robin. And never ever stop using "syrupy concoctions" something so right (and wrong) about that. Deliciously candid telling of the soul's cravings.

[Robin]

your streamin' , never question the muse ~