Come to me

"just follow the road..."

If I were to call out
from the edge of the
glowing horizon at sunset
would you follow your heart
leave your treasures behind
and come to me?

 

If I were to whisper our
words on the bristling breeze
from the center
of my shrouded shelter
would you follow my scent
would you come to me?

 

If I were to breathe
your name into the misty
morning air from my
distant smoky sanctuary
would you walk the road to heaven
would you come to me?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the last stanza most of all. This is a very profound piece of writing.

[Champagne]

Such a touching and romantic piece! I love it. It creates the atmosphere in its earnestness. Very nice!

[Kerry O'Connor]

This is just awesome writing - everything I love in a poem and more. And the picture is a great compliment to the words.

[Monday Parker]

Wow. I loved this poem. I can relate so much to the meaning and your language was so descriptive. It is such a beautiful poem...and somehow kinda sad. I am going to house it in my library. Great poem!!!

[mir]

Such a calm, relaxing, and smooth poem! Very well written! ---Enjoyed this!

[JulieNorell]

You used your vocabulary like paint for an artist! You did a very good job! I like the peice.

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oh these words..beautiful honey coated words..this has a whimizcal charming feel to it..

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

who ever he is , I will Urge you to Run to you .... beautiful poem , so much longing and hope :)

[James Paulin]

Come to Me, all who are weary and heavy-laden, and I will give you rest.

Take My yoke upon you and learn from Me, for I am gentle and humble in heart, and YOU WILL FIND REST FOR YOUR SOULS.

For My yoke is easy and My burden is light.

[Robin]

such a beautiful beckoning .

an amazing graphic you have chosen .