My dear, why, you've always been a b*****d!

You never could make up your mind, dear,

"I love you"

"I need a break"

"I still love you"

have you ever not been self centered?

And have I told you how miserable you are

its gotten quite pathetic

on the rare occasion we talk

you say the same things, wallowing in your misery

its gotten boring, and I'm pretty sure your other seven exes would agree

they are exes, right?

I always wondered why they left you

and now I know why they will continue to

You should realize by now, I was the only one who would have stuck around.

Its a shame that at nineteen, I couldn't be as smart as

that fifeteen year old you dated when you broke up with me.

Oh, did I mention how weird it was? I mean you were nineteen...

I loved you and your fucked up mess

you undeserving b*****d.

You're a little boy posing as a man

just a coward (take her virginity, leave her, yeah, you're just a little boy, you have a way with virgins though, don't you?)

and conversations no longer hold insight, you've played this record before

the audience is getting bored.

But one last request...

do you enjoy waking up alone?

 

 

Reviews

[Requs]

Stating the perdictable-ness of man
And showing the hatred and emotion that the other seems to lack
Always nice to read

[Pen Draggin']

I really like the way you use breath lines, where it takes almost a whole breath to spit out al of the words, very Ginsberg. This poem is very approachable and easy for many people to understand and relate to. Good Job!

[Kimberly_ eternal dream..]

'do you enjoy waking up alone?'
this line's simply awesom!!
poem started out 2 be so soft and at the end showed ur deep emotions!
it's very good!!


-eternal kim

[Jenna]

Damn man. I think they need to redo the saying from "Hell hath no fury" to "Women hath no fury".
There is nothing like The Scorn of a woman or wrath