How I Break

Author's Note

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Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

This it is beautiful... breaking apart loving you..love that such a different way to explain that strong connection, how it really can make you come undone!
This is one of those writes that you think "dam i wish i had thought of that" lol
Brilliant Anne!

[Anne Verona]

Thank you so much :) Your wonderful words of compliment are actually making me giddy right now :D I'm glad you liked it :)

[sereenaoutloud]

Lol you are welcome!! :)

[Valerie]

What a sweet sweet poem, Anne! Ah love... The last stanza is so true! To look so deeply into the eyes of someone you truly love, truly amazing!

[Anne Verona]

Thank you so much :)

[GreenEyedPoet]

This is sweet Anne.
The things that love can do, it can make a person unravel or break apart as you put it.
Just beautiful. :)

[Anne Verona]

Thank you so much :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is sweetly romantic...nicely worded piece....yes, it's hard not to....some people drive us to drink, some people drive us to write.

j.

[Anne Verona]

Thank you so much :) And yes, it really is hard not to.

[Robert]

You took the emotions you are felling and expressed them very nicely here Anne. It seems like you are writing about not being able to write now, about the person you love or loved at one time. It seems like you are saying that you use to write about this person and now you cannot. But in appears you wrote this poem about how you feel at this moment not being able to write and did well expressing those thoughts. Very nicely done and original in the way only you could have expressed it.

[Anne Verona]

Thank you so much for your wonderful compliments :)

[Perkele.7885]

This is a wonderful poem of your objective perceptions in regards to a person that is on your mind!
Quite well done!

[Anne Verona]

Thank you so much :)

[Iris]

It's beautiful. Quite complex, too. I don't think I could ever come up with something like this.

[Anne Verona]

Thank you so much :)