psyche path

thoughts freeing
emotional knots
working loose
surfacing
in the heart
reviewed
by the mind
taking neural path
from mind to hand
sorting themselves
in the act
of creation

Reviews

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

i really enjoyed this beat style write very cool

[Lauriegirl]

this is so lovely and it flows masterfully. You are so talented.

[Alfred Kukitz]

It feels like a new universe from within is being born.

[Wandering Minstrel]

This is a wonderful piece full of heart, soul and questions..I really loved it..keep writing

[Blake Fodor]

Wonderful imagery and wonderful poetry

[Karan Ashara]

This simple poetry has many more words to say despite of a few words used. beautiful.

[Leslie Philibert]

a poet I like, a good poem here, and I really like the bio too, simple and clear !

[Lyn Anderson]

For some reason I thought this might be about a psychopath, but it literally is about neural synapses.

[Tai Ryens]

Ah, the process of creating a poem; tens, perhaps hundreds of concepts raging about and all eventually blending into the one poem written by the writer. Well done.

[Mary Bosworth]

This is poetry at its most beautifully penned ...