I don't want a Knight in armour

I don't want a Knight in armour
neither shining or tinfoil...

I don't want someone with riches
just someone with heart joyous..

I don't care about the cars
the money or the clothes
I don't care about his history
his lineage
nor a rose..

I don't wish to be bought jewellery
or a castle built for me

Just put simply
what i wish
is someone right for me..

Someone with a heart
a piece reserved for me
someone who accepts my gift
a piece of mine to keep..

I'll forgo all the flowers
for a simple smile or three

I'll forgo all the foreign trips
for a windswept chat
a moonlit walk
a hand outstretched to me..

Reviews

[Dandelion]

How sweet! I feel like I can relate to this poem and I really like it! Continue writing!

[Aprille]

This is so sweet and romantic, true love is all a girl needs. :)

[Celestial Witch Child]

Simple and sweet with a nice style of wording. Good work.

[Blake Fodor]

It is thought- provoking and full of wisdom, flowing and generally searching, enjoyable and worthwhile!

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

yearning for love in its most simplistic forms the way it should be

[Leslie Philibert]

fine romantic write...and full of charm and truth..

[anne]

wow...so sweet.......
I don't care.........castle built for me.....I do agree that there lies nothing in worldly possessions...you write it so well......
I'll .......three.....so sweet
someone........keep....again so sweet
loved reading......

[Mary C]

Loved the whole poem. Such a beautiful piece to read.

[Tai Ryens]

Gentle, simple piece portraying the true longings of your own heart. Truly a relaxing, laid back piece. Well done!

[Matching Socks]

What a beautiful and simple piece.
There's no misunderstand here. :)