True Success

It is not
to where we've been -
it's to where we are going
not lost in
this endless spin,
but, one direction, growing

Now, take the truth,
like vitamins -
and be content in knowing
Love gives you your
best chance to win -
your best, you best be showing

Spend time with
life worth living -
try to make real progress
spend less time
doing sin now -
later, less to confess

I hope you've heard
these thoughts I've said -
with words, hope I impress
pray Heaven's Gate
opens for you -
your life is a success

Reviews

[Rene Velez]

nice wordplay and rhyme scheme, great message too, well done, well enjoyed.

[Matching Socks]

Oh boy, one can only hope...
Nice write. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

A simpler poem, less polished than some of your others, but its message reads well.