Splashed by Tears

At the very thought of going immune,
I thought of tears!
Let them go dry.
Once the wish was on my lips,
I failed to utter.
My heart screamed in silence
You are going to lose your sensitivity
My soul cried in vigilance
Beware! You are going to turn dry
Splashed by the rainy thoughts
Paused for a second,
Out of realm…
I thought...
No...
I can’t go dry!!!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A emotional ride in the poem. I agree. When we lose tears. We because dead in heart. I like the ending. Some hope was left. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Mary C]

I was completely mesmerized by this beautiful write

[Tai Ryens]

Praying for numbness and apathy while your heart screams to let itself be known . . . Quite the cathartic piece that portrays your wishes marvelously. Well done.

[Susan Beth Horvath]

This has perfect flow and rhythm along with the fact the message itself is incredible

[Saddam]

Once the wish was on my lips,
I failed to utter.
My heart screamed in.

Very Dard ki dastan wala type poetry. I like it. Its flow is Kamal.

[Wandering Minstrel]

Such a poetic flow this write has ... and very endearing

[Matching Socks]

Nothing like a good long hard wet cry.
I guess you hit that wall sometimes when you become a bit cried out but there's always more in there. :)
Good poem.

[John Anderson]

This was quite the piece! You took time and effort in your poem. It shows!

[Frieda P]

Sometimes it's best to just let her rip and feel the pain...crying is cathartic. Muchly enjoyed this....