sweet potatoe pie

i love you
deeply i love many
deeply

please don't call me
director
master
or any such silly name
(even in jest)

i am not impressed
with acronyms or initials
it doesn't shake my tree

please call me


babe, sweets, honey
or any such
term of endearment
(sweet potatoe pie)

ahhh....
and then there is
music

Reviews

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

what a playful poem very nice

[Rene Velez]

Beautiful word play and engaging imagery...

[Matching Socks]

Sweet potatoe pie...
OMG, I have called my husband this!
Along with honey pumpkin lover...
And a load of others.
Love this poem, it's adorable!

[Frieda P]

I love your sense of wry humor that shines through in your poetic work...

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this too, a look at the inner poerson that needs and deserves verbal recognition..excellent

[Wandering Minstrel]

The electricity in your words literally shocks the senses... ALL of them.

[Emily B]

lovely, lovely work

looking forward to reading more

[Mary C]

Your descriptive narrative is quite excellent due to wonderful word selections.

[Lyn Anderson]

I was really wondering where this one was leading, but you pulled it all together in the end. I would love to know the reason for the toucan image on this particular poem.

[John Anderson]

WOW!!!! This is deeply intense, but I am completely enamoured with it.