157. Stand Erect

Another from the Hot Tub

stand erect
show some poise
forget the noise

feel the music within
ignore the sorry din
of life passing by

let light deflect
my body overcome
beat heart and drum

the fear within
what might have been
to dance the rhythm of goodbye

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

There's magic in that Hot Tub. The meaning and intention of your words sweeps down the page and settles comfortably on the screen with a shrug - ' got here in spite of feelings, fears and perhaps, not quite as much fun as planned ' Many thanks for sharing.

[Anne Martin]

Thanks! I think I've lost the tub lately. I'm trying to finish a novel, and that seems to be all-consuming.

[emmajoygreen]

Everything in its time. Best of luck in 2024

[Matthew Kult]

Enjoyable read. Great write.

With love,

Matthew

[Anne Martin]

Thanks,
~~A