Stupid editing marks.

Are there still editing mistakes in it?

“Blah, blah, blah.” A girl said to her father.

 Can you tell me what is wrong here? Ah there should be a comma instead of a period.

“Blah, Blah, Blah,” A girl said to her father.

It is still wrong? Huh. I’ll try again.

“Blah, Blah, Blah,” The girl droned on to her father.

Come on. That is still not good enough for you? Fine.

“Blah, Blah, Blah,” the girl droned on to her confused father.

Still? You must be kidding me! No? Argh.

“While the square of pi may help in the equation you are working on, wouldn’t it be easier if you used this theory instead of this equation? It might help as many mathematicians said before me…” The girl droned on to her confused father.

Ha! Didn’t see that one coming, DID YA!

Author's Note

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[The Flame of the Knight]

I am absolutly lost with this piece. Haha. I dont know why you wrote it, but if it made you happy, Great!