not Just a boy

not Just a boy

A Poem by Annie S
"

tried something new

"
He's walking faraway, no where exactly, and he's searching for something that isn't possible to find
Just the fear of his heart beating with the sadness that he had left 
His pale eyes brought my attention as I walk passed him, with confusion across his face 
I wanted to say something, but the words came to a halt. His melodious singing aroused my breath.
Looking as he goes away, with the caption of what had transpired, I realised  he wasn't a stranger, and  
not just a boy.

© 2012 Annie S


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It seemed like a screenplay... i write screenplays too and this short write memorized about one screenplay :) I liked your writings and working ways. You've a great talent of writing and making such a nice pieces. I'd love to read your storys'' too as i do complete reading your all short poems :)
Keep writing, i want to read more stuffs :) Don't give up :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

11 Years Ago

lol give up... why would anyone on here do that
This is the moment for everyone to follow the.. read more



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this is beautiful. I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
It seemed like a screenplay... i write screenplays too and this short write memorized about one screenplay :) I liked your writings and working ways. You've a great talent of writing and making such a nice pieces. I'd love to read your storys'' too as i do complete reading your all short poems :)
Keep writing, i want to read more stuffs :) Don't give up :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

11 Years Ago

lol give up... why would anyone on here do that
This is the moment for everyone to follow the.. read more
love your wordplay;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

11 Years Ago

thank you :)
Oh wow. I really love this. My favorite of your writing so far. (:
Amazing job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Annie S

11 Years Ago

thank you :)

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Added on June 24, 2012
Last Updated on June 24, 2012
Tags: boy, fear, sadness

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Annie S
Annie S

San Fernando , Trinidad and Tobago



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