Ok.. I think here that you've left here a msg to others or for those people who do bullshits all the time... it's a msg to be a human and not to be insane. Liked your thoughts. Loved this poem if you want then you can edit here few more lines on bullshits... to save Innocents. Your Chorus's too awesome as your starting is. Keep writing. It's an awesome poem on Bullshits.
In the life, everyday such kind of bad activities done by bad people's. They always hurt others and i don't know why they always enjoy by doing so. It's a great write you writtten and just shared with us, thanks for making such a nice piece. I liked this write much. Keep writing :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
lol thanks you.. this song was written ages ago i have now got better at it so yeah will
keep.. read morelol thanks you.. this song was written ages ago i have now got better at it so yeah will
keep writing as i'm passionately in love in doing so already :)
11 Years Ago
Your welcome :)
Oh, that's great :) well, you seemed ofcourse an awesome passionaaaabbllllleee.. read moreYour welcome :)
Oh, that's great :) well, you seemed ofcourse an awesome passionaaaabbllllleeeeee writer :) sounds nice you're in love doing this, because me too in love making awesome stuffssss :) Hahah
11 Years Ago
lol well Mr inspiring writer keep writing and show people what they don't have and you got
fl.. read morelol well Mr inspiring writer keep writing and show people what they don't have and you got
fly like the wind
:) aha
11 Years Ago
Wow, thanks for your appreciating and motivating words...
well, yeh, fly like the wind, wanna .. read moreWow, thanks for your appreciating and motivating words...
well, yeh, fly like the wind, wanna you wear diamond ring ?
hope you'd love to go for a ride with me when i'll call you via phone RING RING :)
you're an Awesome Annie, wannna you swing along the wind :) ???? Hhahaah
11 Years Ago
gosh ur wierd and funny at the same time, but you're an awsome writer as well you just
need t.. read moregosh ur wierd and funny at the same time, but you're an awsome writer as well you just
need to fly.. BMW car possibly
Your writing is more interesting than mine to be heard :)
11 Years Ago
lol...
yeah, of course... i'll ..well, if you'd too love then you too can fly with me sitting .. read morelol...
yeah, of course... i'll ..well, if you'd too love then you too can fly with me sitting in BMW :) Don;t worry, i won't ask for money to fill the tank of Petrol of BMW .. Hahahahahahah
11 Years Ago
hhuhhhh money? i'm broke so yeah u aint getting any money lol
good luck getting petrol... i'l.. read morehhuhhhh money? i'm broke so yeah u aint getting any money lol
good luck getting petrol... i'l walk :)
Well, don't worry about money... i'll steal your father's bank a.c number and then i'll give you who.. read moreWell, don't worry about money... i'll steal your father's bank a.c number and then i'll give you whole amount of money... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
11 Years Ago
huhhh wow thanks ur not a nice person stealing hmm :(
weirdo :)
11 Years Ago
Aww.. ok.. we;ll, i can do one more thing... i can earn money and then i can take you for a ride wit.. read moreAww.. ok.. we;ll, i can do one more thing... i can earn money and then i can take you for a ride with my money on my bike and in my car.... Hahahaha.. don't worry, i can leave your father's money with him after all i'd then got father's awesome daughter...lol :P Hahah and she won't less than a golden key.. HAHAHAHAH
Ok.. I think here that you've left here a msg to others or for those people who do bullshits all the time... it's a msg to be a human and not to be insane. Liked your thoughts. Loved this poem if you want then you can edit here few more lines on bullshits... to save Innocents. Your Chorus's too awesome as your starting is. Keep writing. It's an awesome poem on Bullshits.
In the life, everyday such kind of bad activities done by bad people's. They always hurt others and i don't know why they always enjoy by doing so. It's a great write you writtten and just shared with us, thanks for making such a nice piece. I liked this write much. Keep writing :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
lol thanks you.. this song was written ages ago i have now got better at it so yeah will
keep.. read morelol thanks you.. this song was written ages ago i have now got better at it so yeah will
keep writing as i'm passionately in love in doing so already :)
11 Years Ago
Your welcome :)
Oh, that's great :) well, you seemed ofcourse an awesome passionaaaabbllllleee.. read moreYour welcome :)
Oh, that's great :) well, you seemed ofcourse an awesome passionaaaabbllllleeeeee writer :) sounds nice you're in love doing this, because me too in love making awesome stuffssss :) Hahah
11 Years Ago
lol well Mr inspiring writer keep writing and show people what they don't have and you got
fl.. read morelol well Mr inspiring writer keep writing and show people what they don't have and you got
fly like the wind
:) aha
11 Years Ago
Wow, thanks for your appreciating and motivating words...
well, yeh, fly like the wind, wanna .. read moreWow, thanks for your appreciating and motivating words...
well, yeh, fly like the wind, wanna you wear diamond ring ?
hope you'd love to go for a ride with me when i'll call you via phone RING RING :)
you're an Awesome Annie, wannna you swing along the wind :) ???? Hhahaah
11 Years Ago
gosh ur wierd and funny at the same time, but you're an awsome writer as well you just
need t.. read moregosh ur wierd and funny at the same time, but you're an awsome writer as well you just
need to fly.. BMW car possibly
Your writing is more interesting than mine to be heard :)
11 Years Ago
lol...
yeah, of course... i'll ..well, if you'd too love then you too can fly with me sitting .. read morelol...
yeah, of course... i'll ..well, if you'd too love then you too can fly with me sitting in BMW :) Don;t worry, i won't ask for money to fill the tank of Petrol of BMW .. Hahahahahahah
11 Years Ago
hhuhhhh money? i'm broke so yeah u aint getting any money lol
good luck getting petrol... i'l.. read morehhuhhhh money? i'm broke so yeah u aint getting any money lol
good luck getting petrol... i'l walk :)
Well, don't worry about money... i'll steal your father's bank a.c number and then i'll give you who.. read moreWell, don't worry about money... i'll steal your father's bank a.c number and then i'll give you whole amount of money... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
11 Years Ago
huhhh wow thanks ur not a nice person stealing hmm :(
weirdo :)
11 Years Ago
Aww.. ok.. we;ll, i can do one more thing... i can earn money and then i can take you for a ride wit.. read moreAww.. ok.. we;ll, i can do one more thing... i can earn money and then i can take you for a ride with my money on my bike and in my car.... Hahahaha.. don't worry, i can leave your father's money with him after all i'd then got father's awesome daughter...lol :P Hahah and she won't less than a golden key.. HAHAHAHAH
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