The truth or the lies?

I wanna know the truth!

I'm glad  that I found you, I'm glad that you care

Tell me the truth, do you love me? or do you simply 

pretend?

My love for you is not to go to waste, so think about your actions before it's 

too late.

You know how I feel when you lie, I throw things at you until  I'm ready to 

cry

What's In you're mind? Tell me 

You should know that I'm not playing with you, my love for you is dead real!

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

A great and a powerful write, your ending touched me to the heart. I loved this poem, i've seen such kinda love, some power and some aggression of true love... about true love. You do true love and you mentioned but what you thinking everyday and night when you lying on your bad at night thinkng about him and putting questions to him... and so on like does he love you or not >? doen't he real or is he doing only pretend >? and so on.

I liked your reality. You've ripped your heart in this piece.. through this piece. Excellent job.

[Annie S]

Thank you so much. Every word, i appreciate. :) this piece of writing that i wrote was reality and that what happened and felt at the same time... thanks again.

[Inspiring Writer]

Your welcome once again :) wow, sounds great that's a real write, that's why this poem's filled with some of your scent :) so, keep writing, by the way, i really loved this piece :)

[Annie S]

Thank you
Am sure you have more talents than me
and i'm looking forward in seeing lots of them. :)

[Inspiring Writer]

wow, now that's really an honor to hear such kinda words from you :) A good person always appreciate the things of other person, he always sees only the positivities in others as same you're the talented one onself too that's you're so positive and thought about me in the way... :)
so, i appreciated your words once again... to you i'm a talented one and to me you're the talented one :)
me too'd gonna be reading your all stuffs very soon Anni :)

[Annie S]

well i appreciate your stalkiness as your name on here is the 'inspiring writer' you inspire young and old after seeing that first poem of yours it makes me feel 'love' again :)

[Inspiring Writer]

Lol, Now you're gonna flattering me :) lol
Thanks again much, well, your name 'Annie's too awesome, it seems like an angels comes into my dream or comes in reality from my dreams and says Hi, Inspiring writer, wanna you go for a ride in a heaven with me... lol HAHAH and i always say, OMG, I'm gonna die... is that true... lol HAHAH Yeh, of course i'd love to :)

[Annie S]

ur gonna fly so high above the blue ocean sky
with dreams of flowers and a BMW car
which you dont have yet........ HAAAA

[Inspiring Writer]

lol... So that doesn't mean that i'll never have... lol i'll have and There'll be millions of Angels in the car but before my car''ll got some tire punchar i'll love to keep only few angels in my car... lol HHAHAHAHAH
YEH, yeh, i know... i know.. but you don't worry, i'll be gonna fly high and high and high with my BMW car not even in the dreams but in reality :)

[Annie S]

hmmm sounds good lol yet. your positiveness gets the better of me :)

[Celestial Witch Child]

Wow. Great piece. You convey such vivid, strong anxiety within simple words. I can really relate to this- the fear and anger that love can bring to the surface. I'm not quite sure what it is in specific, but I think the rhyme scheme is throwing me off a tad. I really love the honesty and that the image you created is far from picturesque. I would really like to see you do a prose poem.