Solitude

I find peace in solitude

with some tears to talk to.

Communicating with fears

that brings us close too.

Rolling down your cheeks

to jump into absorption.

Carrying silly despairs,

sometimes it gets difficult.

To hold on my void

from filling in the emptiness.

Kissing every inch of you

from a distance

or to flow into your barren lands.

Its complicated for me 

to discover another destiny.

Forced to leave many times

or exiled with ceremony.

It hurts..

Yeah, it hurts,

to search new deep latitudes.

Forging subtle faces

to show some ugly gratitude.

Reviews

[JordanIsaacSmith]

"I find peace in solitude
with some tears to talk to.
Communicating with fears
that brings us close too.
Rolling down your cheeks
to jump into absorption.
Carrying silly despairs,
sometimes it gets difficult.
To hold on my void
from filling in the emptiness.
Kissing every inch of you
from a distance
or to flow into your barren lands.
Its complicated for me
to discover another destiny.
Forced to leave many times
or exiled with ceremony.
It hurts..
Yeah, it hurts,
to search new deep latitudes.
Forging subtle faces
to show some ugly gratitude."


All of it, pretty fantastic, if I'm honest. A simple, honest and clear message that everyone can identify with at some point or another! Good work.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Jordan!

[Lizzie]

I find peace in solitude
with some tears to talk to.

I love these lines.. Deep meaning. The whole poem is very deep and emotional. Very touching.

[Shaquana Adams]

Forced to leave many times
or exiled with ceremony.

I love this line. Beautiful poetry!
-QuanaWana

[Anita Singh]

thank you, Shaquana!!

[Stephen]

Kissing every inch of you
from a distance
or to flow into your barren lands
Its complicated for me
to discover another destiny.

~~ Very deep, emotional & precious lines ~~
This poem`s itself a heart of yous which gets bleed in words ~~ through this emotional poem.

Great job!

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Stephen!
The opening lines are my favorite.
"I find peace in solitude
with some tears to talk to."..Something that i do often.. Thank you for reading my work. :)