Solitude

I find peace in solitude

with some tears to talk to.

Communicating with fears

that brings us close too.

Rolling down your cheeks

to jump into absorption.

Carrying silly despairs,

sometimes it gets difficult.

To hold on my void

from filling in the emptiness.

Kissing every inch of you

from a distance

or to flow into your barren lands.

Its complicated for me 

to discover another destiny.

Forced to leave many times

or exiled with ceremony.

It hurts..

Yeah, it hurts,

to search new deep latitudes.

Forging subtle faces

to show some ugly gratitude.

Reviews

[JordanIsaacSmith]

"I find peace in solitude
with some tears to talk to.
Communicating with fears
that brings us close too.
Rolling down your cheeks
to jump into absorption.
Carrying silly despairs,
sometimes it gets difficult.
To hold on my void
from filling in the emptiness.
Kissing every inch of you
from a distance
or to flow into your barren lands.
Its complicated for me
to discover another destiny.
Forced to leave many times
or exiled with ceremony.
It hurts..
Yeah, it hurts,
to search new deep latitudes.
Forging subtle faces
to show some ugly gratitude."


All of it, pretty fantastic, if I'm honest. A simple, honest and clear message that everyone can identify with at some point or another! Good work.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Jordan!

[Prashant Rajput]

A good poetry is a creation of good poet...and I'm saying it's a good one.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Prashant!

[Matching Socks]

There's that saying, nothing worth having comes easy.
Perhaps it applies to love too. Beautiful poetry Anita.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Ana! :)

[Fernando Dardón]

Well, maybe it hurts to look beyond frontiers and to attempt to get further. But as all good things in life, we need to struggle to achieve them. And as you say
"It's complicated for me to discover another destiny"
because when we want to do something different, "out of the box" we usually are critiziced .
This lines specially touched me:

I find peace in solitude
with some tears to talk to.
Communicating with fears
that brings us close too.
Rolling down your cheeks
to jump into absorption.

Since solitude has been part of my life I feel identified with your poem.

Excellent poem!! :)
Keep going like this

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Fernando! :)

[Fernando Dardón]

You're welcome!!! :)

[Author Rucha Joshi]

This is very intricate and deep.
It touches the aloofness of heart even when you're in the crowds.
Loved this piece!

[Anita Singh]

Thank you!! Glad you could relate to this!

[Chris Micha]

Very beautiful, ma'am. Longing for someone and having to rearrange ones life, is complicated and you did an amazing job showing this. :)

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, sir! :)

[Frieda P]

I felt a longing and emotional despair in your words...nicely pen'd annabella.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you so much, Frieda! :)

[DrD]

I sometimes think we are never alone. Our memories become companions forcing themselves into our lives again and again until we discover we are no longer who we thought we were. You captured that concept extremely well with marvelous word selection and flow. Excellent job.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you so much!!

[A. Amos]

The opening lines were mesmerizing and so was the whole read!

[Anita Singh]

Thanks, Amos!

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[Avinash]

Very real and honest take on everyday life. But life was always supposed to be hard..isn't it? To make us stronger and better version of ourselves .
Loved the words you used and the way you used.

[Anita Singh]

Hey, Avi! Thank you so much!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Brilliant imagery and great transitions!

I feel like I went on a journey and saw all those images!

[Anita Singh]

Thank you so much!!! :)