Solitude

I find peace in solitude

with some tears to talk to.

Communicating with fears

that brings us close too.

Rolling down your cheeks

to jump into absorption.

Carrying silly despairs,

sometimes it gets difficult.

To hold on my void

from filling in the emptiness.

Kissing every inch of you

from a distance

or to flow into your barren lands.

Its complicated for me 

to discover another destiny.

Forced to leave many times

or exiled with ceremony.

It hurts..

Yeah, it hurts,

to search new deep latitudes.

Forging subtle faces

to show some ugly gratitude.

Reviews

[JordanIsaacSmith]

"I find peace in solitude
with some tears to talk to.
Communicating with fears
that brings us close too.
Rolling down your cheeks
to jump into absorption.
Carrying silly despairs,
sometimes it gets difficult.
To hold on my void
from filling in the emptiness.
Kissing every inch of you
from a distance
or to flow into your barren lands.
Its complicated for me
to discover another destiny.
Forced to leave many times
or exiled with ceremony.
It hurts..
Yeah, it hurts,
to search new deep latitudes.
Forging subtle faces
to show some ugly gratitude."


All of it, pretty fantastic, if I'm honest. A simple, honest and clear message that everyone can identify with at some point or another! Good work.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Jordan!

[Surya]

Living a life as such gives you strength...I enjoyed it...:)

[SAYED THANGAL]

I like this type of narrative poems. It is communicating directly to the minds.

[Anjan]

Liked it very much.The way u ve narrated is really touching

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
very deep and profound.......dark sad write.....
we all love solitude.......isn't it therapeutic?
emotional and beautiful poem!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Pushkar! Glad you liked it..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome.......!!!! :) :)

[Mary Bradley]

Eloquent poem Anita Singh ...I'd relate to it as I crave solitude to be at peace :-)

[Ehra Khan]

lovely poem! regular rhyming that adds to the rhythm and the vocabulary that conveys your emotions really well! keep up:)

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write! Emotions flowing in this piece, with terrific word play and
clear message, I enjoyed reading this, work to be proud of! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Anita Singh]

Thanks! So nice of you to say that!! :)

[Shivalik Kalsotra]

I see very intelligent use of words to express very deep feelings...full of true feelings and creativity...super like from me...great work

[Anita Singh]

Thank you for reading my work! :)

[Saddam]

It hurts..
Yeah, it hurts,
to search new deep latitudes.

It always hurts..
Great write dear friend.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you!!