Love in the dark

Love in the dark

 

You love me on Saturday night

You love me again on Sunday

But when Monday comes, you forget who I am.

You love me only in the nights

You want me when you can’t see my sad eyes

You love me when I pretend to smile

And then when Tuesday comes

You walk in front of me without saying “Hi”

You love me on the dance floor

But you ignore me when I knock your door

Hey! I am the same woman

The one you loved in the night behind the bar

The one you asked out for a picnic in a park

You scarred and played  games with my heart

The same old girl you kissed so many times in the dark.

 

 

Reviews

[raj24]

for a moment i couldn't find a word to express myself, its just amazing, we love people without saying much, and they use us like we really don't have any words to say..we are not neglected we are just used...nice one...n hmm yes u really write like him, Oscar Wilde..:)

[Anita Singh]

Thank you so much for that wonderful review! :)

[Eve Ola]

this journey is not as easy as the way we fall in love. u pictured good enough with the best title describing all. Good work

[DrD]

I was honored to have one of my books quoted in Goodreads. That quote was, "Men love their toys and it's a woman's job not to be one of them." You have presented the same theme here and with a special sensistivity that made it an excellent read.

[Tai Ryens]

Loving somebody only when they prove easy to handle has profound effects on the somebody, and not always good . . . You express that side of the story vibrantly, picking away at the scab so the pain makes itself known in a dull ache and the memories sting, even after so long a time has passed. Meaningful and deep, well penned indeed.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Tai. I really appreciate your words of encouragement. :)

[Chris Micha]

Sad when love is not reciprocated, been there. You did a wonderful job on this piece Anna! Great job. :)

[Anita Singh]

Christian, thank you for dropping by to read my work. I am thankful to you and also sad that you have been there too. It is a sad state to be in.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of the story in the poem. The words twist to a perfect ending. No weakness in the amazing poetry. Thank you for sharing.
Coyote

[Anita Singh]

Thanks a lot. So sweet of you to say that! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Your poetry. Always alive and having reason.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Great little poem about a guy playing with a girls heart and toying with there affections.
Guys can be cruel as you clearly see by this poem......
No one should get there feelings toyed with love and someones heart is a very precious thing...
That should be given to someone who keeps it tucked away safe.
Great meaningful, deep and emotional write.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you for sharing your views, Cimmy. :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

you are wellcome hun :)

[Shaquana Adams]

You scarred and played games with my heart
The same old girl you kissed so many times in the dark.

I can relate to this. A very poignant and beautiful write Annabella. I enjoyed!
-QuanaWana

[Anita Singh]

Thanks, Shaquana. Glad you enjoyed reading my work. :)

[Joyrider]

I think its about an ex-partner. I think, more than hatred for him, there is a want for him to be sweet and kind as he used to be once.

[Anita Singh]

You are absolutely right. Thank you for reading my work. :)

[Avinash]

There is no you and me in love, it is always us.

[Anita Singh]

Yes that's how it should be. :)

[sharonlee]

I was in that place once... and swore never again.

Emotively potent Annabella.

[Anita Singh]

Good that you put an end to the suffering.
Thank you, Sharon.