Love in the dark

Love in the dark

 

You love me on Saturday night

You love me again on Sunday

But when Monday comes, you forget who I am.

You love me only in the nights

You want me when you can’t see my sad eyes

You love me when I pretend to smile

And then when Tuesday comes

You walk in front of me without saying “Hi”

You love me on the dance floor

But you ignore me when I knock your door

Hey! I am the same woman

The one you loved in the night behind the bar

The one you asked out for a picnic in a park

You scarred and played  games with my heart

The same old girl you kissed so many times in the dark.

 

 

Reviews

[raj24]

for a moment i couldn't find a word to express myself, its just amazing, we love people without saying much, and they use us like we really don't have any words to say..we are not neglected we are just used...nice one...n hmm yes u really write like him, Oscar Wilde..:)

[Anita Singh]

Thank you so much for that wonderful review! :)

[Gavrilo Princip]

Reminds me of a cartoon I used to see called Love Is.
One that always stuck in my mind was: "Love Is always taking the chipped cup"

A lot is said just in our actions.

[Dr. Sojan Antony Veetti..]

Excellent ....True and open reflection...

[TheLostMind]

Wow. This one is really good. A sad yet beautiful piece. Loved the last 2 lines -
"You scarred and played games with my heart
The same old girl you kissed so many times in the dark.",
Very powerful write. This one did tug at my heartstrings. Good job :)

[Gee]

Conditional love,and not you setting them.Nice poem

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Gee!

[Gee]

You're welcome

[Matching Socks]

I've had men like this, it had to be on their terms. But that's not what love is, it's not part time.
It's all or nothing. Very relatable.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you!

[Baby Ricochet]

Some people come into your life just to jerk you around. Push him into an ant hill.

[Swaroop Manikandan]

great read my friend... and yes piercing...

[Lizzie]

I can relate to this write. it is genuine and heart felt. Thank you for sharing.

[Eve Ola]

this journey is not as easy as the way we fall in love. u pictured good enough with the best title describing all. Good work