LAST GOODBYE

Let’s talk so soft 

the right of sense the warmth of touch

from millions miles distance you've come

millions hours waiting my soul is numb

do you know i never change?

Do you stay the same?

Let’s hug so tight

this feeling is deep the moment is right

my fingers move through your hair

don’t you know how much i care?

Your embrace is so hot

do you miss me a lot?

Let’s dance so close

thanks for the jasmine thanks for the rose

we know we beg this love for more

but you are not mine anymore

for someone has won your heart

feels like wounded with thousands darts

Let’s kiss so sweet

tastes like for ages we don’t meet

i know you still love me

and i wait for you till i die

dreaming you are back in my arms

keeping this love and leaving no harm

Let’s forgive and forget

forgiving my deepest love that makes you sad

forgetting our love story we should not regret

I wish I could erase the date first time we met

Let’s say goodbye

we must desert it and never asking why 

I look after this feeling in dainty

I keep your name in my solitary

if someday I’ll meet you in another destiny

would you remember me?

Reviews

[Fernando Dardón]

Wow.... I must tell, I almost cried with this beautiful piece...
It touched my feelings, my heart, my soul. It described what I once felt, and what I still feel.
I love Its rhythm, it's so melancholic and soothing at the same time. Its sad, deep and breathless.
I certainly would dedicate this poem to that very special girl which I once I held hands.
I certainly would use this poem as lyrics, cause there is a magical, realistic, sadly true and romantic sound.
I certainly would qualify this poem as one of my favorite (since this very moment).
I specialy loved this lines:

"Let’s forgive and forget
forgiving my deepest love that makes you sad
forgetting our love story we should not regret
I wish I could erase the date first time we met"

It remembers me so many things, because I once thought that too. That maybe it would have been better never knowing her...
In other words, I feel so identified with this poem.

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!

Fernando

[Anita Singh]

WOW! Fernando, my dear friend. I am so glad to know that my poem stirred so many beautiful emotions in you. What can i say? I am humbled. It makes me sad too that you regret knowing her and going too far. Just know my dear friend that you can always share your feelings, your thoughts about it (just like you did now) if you want to. You can count on me, buddy.
Lots of love.
Anna

[just Penny]

Deep, sad and quite moving. You have written some nice sentiments here. Well done. Penny

[Anita Singh]

Thanks, Penny! :)

[A. Amos]

we must desert it and never asking why 
I look after this feeling in dainty
I keep your name in my solitary
if someday I’ll meet you in another destiny
would you remember me?

Above lines were amazing, great work my friend

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Amos! These are my favorite lines too!!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the description of the talk, embrace, dance and the kiss. The nice flow of thoughts led the reader to a sad ending. Hope for a another time leave us wishing for the nights and days to never end. I did like the question at the end.Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Anita Singh]

You are welcome and thank you for appreciating my work! :)

[Saddam]

Let’s forgive and forget
forgiving my deepest love that makes you sad
forgetting our love story we should not regret
I wish I could erase the date first time we met.

Oh dear! You make me misty... Rolling tears of two from my eyes. Such a sencible and touching poem you have made. Great read.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Sadd. Didn't mean to make you misty-eyed.

[Saddam]

Let’s forgive and forget
forgiving my deepest love that makes you sad
forgetting our love story we should not regret
I wish I could erase the date first time we met.

Oh dear! You make me misty... Roalling tears of two from my eyes. Such a sencible and touching poem you have made. Great read.

[Saddam]

Let’s forgive and forget
forgiving my deepest love that makes you sad
forgetting our love story we should not regret
I wish I could erase the date first time we met.

Oh dear! You make me misty... Roalling tears of two from my eyes. Such a sencible and touching poem you have made. Great read.

[Sami Khalil]

"Let’s dance so close

thanks for the jasmine thanks for the rose

we know we beg this love for more

but you are not mine anymore

for someone has won your heart

feels like wounded with thousands darts"

I sense a song quality in this touching write. Bravo.......................

[Anita Singh]

Really?? Thanks, Sami! :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. Really. It sounds lyrical in some lines. You are welcome...:)...........