LAST GOODBYE

Let’s talk so soft 

the right of sense the warmth of touch

from millions miles distance you've come

millions hours waiting my soul is numb

do you know i never change?

Do you stay the same?

Let’s hug so tight

this feeling is deep the moment is right

my fingers move through your hair

don’t you know how much i care?

Your embrace is so hot

do you miss me a lot?

Let’s dance so close

thanks for the jasmine thanks for the rose

we know we beg this love for more

but you are not mine anymore

for someone has won your heart

feels like wounded with thousands darts

Let’s kiss so sweet

tastes like for ages we don’t meet

i know you still love me

and i wait for you till i die

dreaming you are back in my arms

keeping this love and leaving no harm

Let’s forgive and forget

forgiving my deepest love that makes you sad

forgetting our love story we should not regret

I wish I could erase the date first time we met

Let’s say goodbye

we must desert it and never asking why 

I look after this feeling in dainty

I keep your name in my solitary

if someday I’ll meet you in another destiny

would you remember me?

Reviews

[Fernando Dardón]

Wow.... I must tell, I almost cried with this beautiful piece...
It touched my feelings, my heart, my soul. It described what I once felt, and what I still feel.
I love Its rhythm, it's so melancholic and soothing at the same time. Its sad, deep and breathless.
I certainly would dedicate this poem to that very special girl which I once I held hands.
I certainly would use this poem as lyrics, cause there is a magical, realistic, sadly true and romantic sound.
I certainly would qualify this poem as one of my favorite (since this very moment).
I specialy loved this lines:

"Let’s forgive and forget
forgiving my deepest love that makes you sad
forgetting our love story we should not regret
I wish I could erase the date first time we met"

It remembers me so many things, because I once thought that too. That maybe it would have been better never knowing her...
In other words, I feel so identified with this poem.

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!

Fernando

[Anita Singh]

WOW! Fernando, my dear friend. I am so glad to know that my poem stirred so many beautiful emotions in you. What can i say? I am humbled. It makes me sad too that you regret knowing her and going too far. Just know my dear friend that you can always share your feelings, your thoughts about it (just like you did now) if you want to. You can count on me, buddy.
Lots of love.
Anna

[Aru Bansal]

That's just so awesome. ^_^

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Aru! :D

[Aru Bansal]

Your welcome Ann..:)

[Kuldeep desai]

This one is really awesome, your writing has some kind of magic........This poem made its way to my heart and settled down there only..........

[Anita Singh]

Thanks a lot, Kuldeep! :)

[Matthew Bosko]

So crushing, but I can defiantly relate. Very nice piece.

[Lizzie]

AMAZING!! What a perfect way to say good byes. Good byes are heart breaking regardless.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Lizzie!

[maria ( rose)]

wow. emotional and heartfelt .Goodbyes are always the hardest.
This my dear is so beautifully written.
maria rose♥

[Anita Singh]

Thanks a lot, Maria!

[Matilda]

All I can think of is ... so so so beautiful! great job !

[Anita Singh]

Thank you for reading my work! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Wow very sweet and emotional and so romantic and heartfelt, then it turns heartbreaking.
Sad sad ending, to a love that seemed so real and true.
Brilliantly written hun, I felt the emotion and pain.
Great job.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Cimmy darling! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

You are welcome hun :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so sweet Annabella.There is a soothing quality to it .I really loved it.VIDYA ......lol

[Anita Singh]

You got me, VIDYA! :P
Thank you for reading my work. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol........you are welcome Anna :)