Wow I could relate to this write. Your words are enticing rendering me unable to withstand the words that you form. I stand in awe for this poetess is A lovely poem indeed. Great WriTe!! :)
What I like about this poem is that it has come directly from the heart...your language is nice and easy...although I wouldn't like to classify this in any category...but this is quite nice!
Wow, annabella. You are one of the few souls who look farther out than their own to seek to understand the world around them. And not only this world, but those beyond our own reach. It is a selfless act to empathize with those who suffer on a daily basis and take it into oneself. You have a good heart and know where your love lies. That is a rare trait in people. Very well written, as always.
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It pains me to see the horrors of death, destruction and disease in the world. A massacre takes plac.. read moreIt pains me to see the horrors of death, destruction and disease in the world. A massacre takes place somewhere while the rest of the world looks the other way. Hearing such news, I get depressed instantly. That's when I jot down my thoughts. Thanks for reading and liking, Aradia!
You truly have a heart akin to mine. I know your three passions like they were my own limbs. I really like your use of the word "prefiguring." Great placement of that word. I like that your poetry needs no falsely imposed structure to have a flow all its own. It is as clear as a paragraph, but yet it is as poetic as a any poem of careful constructed iambic pentameter because you use your capitalization and careful punctuation as part of the meter and flow. It is like a river with rushes and eddies. I almost wonder if the two spaces before the word "union" are intentional or accidental because you clearly make every jot of this poem count. Very well said and beautifully explored! Thank you for letting me read your poem!
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10 Years Ago
Thanks Robby! The two spaces before "union" were accidental. Didn't knew it would be interpreted inn.. read moreThanks Robby! The two spaces before "union" were accidental. Didn't knew it would be interpreted inn this way! Thanks once again for your lovely review. :-)
Our pursuits carry us soaring among the clouds, but we are always anchored to earth by the strings connected to our hearts. The higher we fly, the more painful those stretched strings become. We will never reach the stars without suffering, without hurt. Excellent poem :)
Anita.
A is for Alluring
N is for Natural
I is for Intelligent
T is for Twisted
A is for Adventurous
That's all about me.
Read between the lines to know me better.
And also...
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