Half Moon

A Vampire Night

The cold wind blows

When will the killing end

Nobody knows

 

The lighting strikes

As they fly round and round

Carefully plotting

Selecting those on the ground

 

Devastating rain pours down

Draining all of the happiness in this old town

Carefully at night watch your back if you will

Or suffer their wrath, taking misery's pill

Reviews

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Great writing! Love the creativity and use of words to draw in the reader. Keep sharing

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I love the rhyme scheme hear as well. I could see the lightening striking the ground clearly. Overall I enjoyed the read. It truly was mysterious. Thank you for sharing. :)

[J Johnson III]

Thank you for your kind words.

[Afraa]

I love your rhyming scheme here. Very mysterious. Good job, Annabel.

[J Johnson III]

Thank you. I read someone's poem about vampires and decided to give it a shot.

[Afraa]

Vampires... not really my kind of genre, but some people pull it off, such as yourself!

[J Johnson III]

haha you are too kind

[Afraa]

Right back at you. :)