Version 2

There has to be something more

All there is just can’t be one chore

To work so hard just to miss the sun

Leaving with the want of this life being done

A reason to live a reason to push

A chance to unstick oneself from this mush

Looking to the sun and holding the stare

It won’t be missed again, this truth I swear

Reviews

[Willa Sjoblom]

I really liked this, the whole 'questioning why we are here'-thing, and how there must be something more than this. The last 2 lines were especially powerful.