Daisy and Ella
A Book by Annabee90
This is the rough first chapter for a novel I am writing, focussing on a woman's obsession with another woman, and her jealousy over their differences in wealth/lifestyle/opportunity etc.
© 2016 Annabee90
Author's Note
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Can you guess who Daisy is going to be?
What do you think of the dialogue?
Are parts of the writing too cliché?
Thank you, Anna
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Added on October 17, 2016
Last Updated on October 17, 2016
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Annabee90Redondo Beach, CA
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26 years old and counting...
From the UK but a couple of months ago I moved to LA - USA for my boyfriend's work. Which is a big adventure in itself!
I used to be a primary school teacher in the UK.. more..
Writing
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