Pain can't leave.

It's first day since Alex-s parent's died. She moved to her older brother house,she was going to new school,she meet new people and new problems.

First day at school. Alexandra was very scared,with reason. She wear black beacouse her parent died and she is never smiling that left bad influence to kids in her school. She was eleven years old and she was listening scream and metal. That confused people,they was saying ,,She is just eleven for God safe and she listen to that demons,God help that poor child and her stupid brother. He is falt...'' ,stuff like that.She was bully-ed by everybody,her only friend was her brother. Years passed she was growing but she was sad. She was cuting her self. And she almost died.Her Brother was sad because off that,he was thinking that all is his fault. Alexandra is now 15 years old,she lives hell again beacose of bullyes. 

It's first day in middle school, Alexandra is drepressive. Max,her brother is driving her to school.

''Alexandra,remove your tears. Don't be sad,you will find friends here,i promise.''-Max

''Max,please you know that i can't stop crying. I'm sorry.''-Alexandra

''Just get in car, you will late.''-Max

''I don't care. I will not go there.''-Alexandra

''I beg you,please for me?'-Max

''This is last time.''-Alexandra

Reviews

[Tea Boo]

Anaaaa :D I like it (Y) The beggining is really cool, i can't wait for next chapter :3

[Tomislav Petricevic]

The story seems pretty dark, I like that, though I need to read more before I can say anything else. As with Tea's story, there are some grammar mistakes and tense inconsistencies that need fixing.
I encourage you to keep working on it. :)

[Anna Boo]

Thank you Tomislav.I will work on my book.