Life

Life

A Poem by AnnaKat_Brown
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A poem about the reality of life.

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Life in this world, it's up and down.
One day in the clouds, one day underground.
Life in this realm, I do not understand.
I am a pilgrim in this weary land.

In this life, there are two things I know:
Christ is my hope, and this world is not my home.
Yet, many things I shall never understand.
Like Algebra 3, and man's nature of sin.

These few words summarize life:
Man is desperate and full of strife.
Outside of Christ, there is no hope.
Like a devil's hell, dark and alone. 

© 2013 AnnaKat_Brown


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Counter verse:

I don't believe in much of anything,
I have faith in being good and what it brings.

I don't agree that outside of Christ, there is no hope rather there are so many faiths, I think there is scope.

Posted 11 Years Ago


AnnaKat_Brown

11 Years Ago

I'm sorry that you feel this way. I know from my personal experience that the only true hope and sat.. read more
Parsimony

11 Years Ago

Yes, it's a very humble poem. I just don't feel the same way. I rather not get into a theologian d.. read more
AnnaKat_Brown

11 Years Ago

I do not wish to debate either. This is not the place. Thank you so much for the review!
Very meaningful piece.
Appreciate your style and rhyming.
Enjoyed reading.

Posted 11 Years Ago


YOur firm belief in God comes across clearly in this poem.YOUr concept of life is very real.Beautiful poem with exquisite thoughts.Very well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amazing! considering the amount of books have been written and the vast volume of lectures been concluded no one has put it more simply and powerfull.
Inspiring.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm speechless here what should i gotta say of this write but i wanna say i liked this
Life in this world, it's up and down.
One day in the clouds, one day underground...these lines're the reason of my speechless wordings...great job...you did really a great job.
liked this piece and as a suggestion i wanna say you should gotta write one book on this "LIFE"..i'd love to read...
nice;y penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


My favorite line..."Christ is my hope, and this world is not my home."

So simple, yet so hard to remember sometimes.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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I'm an uncommon woman with a common name. Jesus is my source of inspiration. His goodness is too much for me to contain, so it spills out in my writing. Running chases away my doubts and fears. more..

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