What Crosses Your mind

If you aren't in the moment, you are either looking forward to uncertainty, or back to pain and regret. -- Jim Carrey

What Crosses Your Mind?

What crosses your mind,

When words don’t come out,

And all that formulates within,

Are choppy half-complete impressions made of sounds,

Or maybe words that barely make it to a sentence

 

What is it that crosses your mind?

At the hit of thoughts against the contour of your essence

And at the relief , once they leap aback into the swirl

 

What crosses your mind?

When conversation takes place within

 

Do you hold on to faith?

Or do you hold on to fear?

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Its beautiful poem, sometimes not even faith and not even fear but just its about fate

[A. Amos]

This is deep and thought provoking...faith always stay where it belong so does fear...

Brilliant piece of art

[Ian Gilmour]

What makes this particularly powerful is its' universality. You've managed to address complex ideas within half a page yet the focus is on the infinite possibilities of the questions rather than the finite series of possible answers. This is great and I look forward to reading and reviewing more of your work!

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[AnnaGMartin]

Thank You Ian I appreciate your review :))

[Ian Gilmour]

I appreciate your talent

[Everett DeValle]

Fight or flight...and everyone has their own response or non response to it...a really deep and contemplative write...O enjoyed reading your poem.

[The Representative]

And thanks for sharing. Life's repetition makes it difficult sometimes, indulging something such as this.


I still do however - not for the sake of what's been made, but for the other person who's made it.



Cryptic. Rhetorical. Probing the mind.



How you'll have felt, as soon as knowing of this review's existence, through a Hotmail account or whatever perhaps else: that's why I wrote it Anna.