Yelling, Yelling

Just a little dose of reality that came to me. Let me know what you think. This is one of my first poems with an actual rhyme scheme- yay. :)

Yelling, yelling
It's all I hear
In every room
In every ear

Screaming, crying
None of that
It wouldn't be pretty
It wouldn't be smart

Hiding, hiding
Away in my bed
I wish it was over
I wish she was dead

Smiling, smiling
To face the world
Inside I'm dying
Why can't you let it be?

Yelling, yelling
It's all I hear
All day, every day
It's been nearly two years

Reviews

such a sad write, so full of emotion. Written well!

[Deck_As_Heck]

this is really good it's kinda sad. reminds me of my parents.