Lullaby Of Pain

..i don't know....sorry it sucks

I lay on the ground broken, my tears seeping to the Earth.

The love I feel for you has such a great worth.

This pain that is churning in my heart,

 is surely ripping it apart.

I would gladly die for you.

For you, my heart rips in two.

Words can not express the love I feel.

This pain I feel is extreamly real.

The tears are falling down like rain

 as I sing a lullaby of pain.

 

 

 

Reviews

[salvador (camuel choisu..]

wow i felt the passion in this poem great work of art.

[The Lone Wolf Prose]

I really like the last lines "The tears are falling down like rain/as I sing a lullaby of pain." Very poignant and almost haunting...
Good job. Keep it up
~LW

[Solitary Dreamer]

That was a great poem and if I do know who you are talkin about.. he cares about you I can tell so please don't be sad. Be happy:)

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

what love can do to us..if it can bring us bliss,it can put us in the deepest of the abyss..
well written.

[Aggie Skeleton]

Exscuse me while I cry. I love you, but god. You're so emo.