Confused

....yes, crappy poem. yes, crappy tittle....this guy always makes me confused...i love him soooo much....

Again, we lay alone together.

I swear l'll love you for forever.

In the night, you kissed my face.

When you do, my heart starts to race.

You ask what I was thinking.

In your arms, I was sinking.

I told you how i felt for you.

I'm not sure if you ever knew.

But you didn't respond.

Did it hurt our bond?

You continued to love me.

I felt a little free.

But you didn't say you felt the same.

This had set my heart to flame.

The next day you treated me differently.

Though last night you treated me gently.

Today was as if I never existed.

Now my heart was growing twisted.

You flirted with her.

Who do you prefer?

Did you remember last night?

I hope that you might.

You are much lovlier than the sea.

Will you tell me that you love me?

 

Reviews

[Solitary Dreamer]

He does well at least he acts like it.... don't worry I mean what's not to like?

[Eric Cox]

This has sadness and beauty. Like it a lot.