Sadness

Sadness

A Poem by Mithridate
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Dear father up above,

Here on Earth I feel no love.

My family hates me.

I am longing to be free.

What am I supposed to do?

I just long to be with you.

They call me a stupid fool.

They are so very cruel.

Why must they have to do this?

I am falling in a black abyss.

Their harsh words make me cry.

There are sometimes where I want to die.

So my father, please take me home.

That is where I want to roam.

© 2010 Mithridate


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I love this poem, the way it rhymes and every thing. Reminds me of my life, at my fathers house. My twin is the one that get the love and I'm the one that is the cast away.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I personnally LOVEEEEE the way you rhyme and how this flows. Its very wel written. Great job. Keep writing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The rhyme is rocky - needs a bit of work. I like the theme and the passion in this. And it is true that this, too, shall pass. Life gets better - I promise.

Posted 14 Years Ago


It's a good write but it could be better, the rhyme seems a little forced but keep it up. :) And hang in there, things will get better. I am insomniac also, it's not fun.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 25, 2010
Last Updated on May 19, 2010
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Just another another teenager with insomnia, just another teenager in love with someone who's in love with someone else, another teenager who is still looking for a place in this world to belong, the .. more..

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