Autumn Evening

Autumn Evening

A Poem by Annie
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Inspired after a long walk through the woods

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 Tired shadows of trees
Lean long and low
Against the leaf-strewn valley.

The sun blinks bleary-eyed
And blurs the creek
Into golden smudges.

Wind combs fingers
Through oak and beech
In preparation for night.

And in one slow motion
The heavens blink
A thousand stars into being.

© 2014 Annie


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And in one slow motion
The heavens blink
A thousand stars into being... Loved such lines. Nice imagery!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is breathtaking! Such imagery, my god... I'm really truly in love with this piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Annie

10 Years Ago

Nothing makes me happier than hearing such sincere and positive remarks. Thank you very much!
A fresh wave touched my face and blow me away to the season of autumn .. through this piece. I enjoyed this piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Annie

10 Years Ago

I'm glad that you have been looking through my humble showcase of poetry. And I feel great knowing t.. read more
I like the imagery in this poem and the progression from day to night scenes...Bravo

Posted 10 Years Ago


Annie

10 Years Ago

Thank you. I love getting reviews that are so positive!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:)...............
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I think you've created vivid images the reader can easily picture in their mind with this. The last verse is my favorite, it really compliments the idea well. I'm not so sure about the third verse as far as hair. I find it hard to picture that in my head as it relates to leaves. I think you did a fine job of putting into words what you saw around you for this poem though. Glad I read it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Annie

10 Years Ago

I'm SO happy for your advice. I must admit, I had my doubts with the third verse as well. It's kind .. read more
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10 Years Ago

It was my pleasure. :)

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Added on November 13, 2013
Last Updated on October 1, 2014
Tags: Nature, Autumn, Evening, Night, Sleep

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Annie
Annie

Garrettsville, OH



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I never get tired of: Moonlight, Sun shining through leaves, Singing in the shower, Classical: languages and music, Star gazing, Running, Snowboarding, I am eighteen, I live on a farm, .. more..

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