Violin's Voice

Haiku about the sensation of violin's music

Violin's vibrato

Quivered, like a cricket's song

Velvet to the night

Author's Note

Please give an honest review :) Tell me if the last line feels smooth and congruent with the rest of the poem.

Reviews

[isus]

yes yes yes this is great + i love violin, love love

[Annie]

Isn't violin music the greatest?!

Thanks for your review!

[isus]

it is so special

[Angi]

I quite like the last line in your haiku, Annie. Velvet to the night just sounds haunting and haunting is what I hear when I think of violin music. Lovely. Angi~

[Annie]

Thanks! It's good to know; I really wasn't sure if it was fluid or not. You have relieved a lot of my worries :)

[captain]

Nice, I dreamt of playing the violin since I was still young, and until now it's still in my bucket list to learn someday. You've create something beautiful here, Haiku are meant to be short but really profound, I think you've done just enough to make us imagine.

[Annie]

Yeah, I have a violin sitting in its case in my room. I keep telling myself to just jump in and start learning :)

[Rob Santana]

I know nothing about Haiku, but I like it a lot. I'm into all types of music, but metal is my favourite genre of music. But the violin I have to say brings out great emotions for me. I love the sound it makes. It's such a beautiful sound. This instrument can bring tears to my eyes when I hear it, that is the honest truth. I'm not one to shed tears ever. Anyways nicely done Annie.

[Annie]

Thanks! Violin is one of my favorite sounding instruments!