the middle of summer

...it's so rainy, so foggy,

mermaids sleepily celebrate -

the middle of summer

which was not

i look at their dances and think

rainy, foggy thoughts...

probably, therefore, no - summer...

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

A 'Mid-summer's dream' perhaps? Very creative write - almost dream state in structure! :-)

[Ann Lo]

the classic goes into the subconscious and shines from there, yes))
many thanks that noted the form of writing - i tried to express the moment of contemplation))