They were right

Just a small effort

I always heard about angels without wings..
But i never believed those things..
Until i saw her smiling..

It was not like love at first sight..
But i got to know that the ppl were right..

They were right about stories i heard,
Becz that smiling picture of her,never blurred..

From waiting for her to come online..
To holding her hands and telling her..she's mine..

We never realised how we spent hours on silly talks..
And covered miles on romantic walks..

A surge of thoughts surrounded me when i held her hand,
Like how beautiful she'll look,wearing those wedding bands..

Nd i don't know how to describe her beauty..
Just keeping her happy all day was my duty..

Her skin as smooth as milk ..her hair like a touch of silk ..
She smelled to strawberries ..nd her cheeks as red as cherries..

Infact when i used to desribe her it sounded less like a ballad ..
Nd more like i wasn't dating a girl bt a fruit salad..

Her smile was my favourite curve..
I was proud of that smile,i deserved..

The beautiful understanding we had..
Our trust on each other, that made me so glad..

We used to love ,support,trust nd care..
Nd u became a part of my every morning prayer ..

But i forgot..
If forgot that every prayer doesn't come true..
I forgot that every boat doesn't come through..

Our end was never supposed to happen..
That curve was never supposed to flatten.

Nothing is left now..
But i know we both are happy,somehow..

So let's come over all the regrets nd blames..
Coz life..isn't about people or mains..
It's about smiling in pains..
Staying dry in rains..
😇
-Ankit gupta

Author's Note

She liked it

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the journey of your words how you effectively managed to make me feel the passion and warmth of love and then coming to an end that she was gone and you conveyed a meaning. It was cleverly written. Thank you so much for sharing.

[Ankit gupta]

Thanks for the appreciation😇

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺

[Swetha]

Nice poetry with perfect rhymes. Loved it

[Ankit gupta]

Thanks for the compliment😇

[Anjali]

This is like the most beautiful and wonderful poem I've ever read, it's a bummer that it doesn't have any reviews, cuz it deserves a lot! Of course she will like it if you put it this way.... Absolutely amazing!

[Ankit gupta]

Thankyou anjali😇

[Anjali]

YOU ARE WELCOME.