FIRST LOVE

There's no love like the first.

FIRST LOVE…

I still remember the day

you gave me smile

while I was staring you

I didn't realize

my heartbeat stopped

just for awhile

happy was my heart

& so were my eyes

I went crazy for you

& had sleepless nights

thinking of you

I hugged my teddy tight

& here I am

with the blue night

looking at the stars

 that shine so bright

still waiting for the day

 when you will be mine.

Reviews

[Riversong]

Would you like some tips on the grammar? I wasn't sure if it was intentional or not, but it needs some work if you go that route. Otherwise, it's good.

[anjiee]

Thank you very much for your carefulness..it was just to match the rhyming scheme but your thoughts & your tips are always welcome.

[ManasaC]

First Love a special feeling...Well interpreted!!!

[anjiee]

Thanks very much...