IS THIS LOVE?

Are you in love? come & find...

IS THIS LOVE?

   

Tell me my HEART
what's going on?
Are you falling in LOVE
or are you falling apart?

sometimes you are so OBLIVIOUS
while sometimes too CONSCIOUS,
sometimes you behave OBNOXIOUS
& sometimes TENACIOUS.

A bit you are SCARED
a bit NERVOUS.
What's the reason behind it
& what is it's purpose?

Getting so stubborn
getting so PUZZLED,
stupidly CRAZY & even too WEIRD.
Suddenly my laughter turns into tears
is it my HAPPINESS or any fear?

Tell me my heart
why are you so MYSTERIOUS?
can't take it anymore
am getting BIZARRE!
Oh please tell me silly
what's wrong with you?
Are you falling in love?
Or are you falling apart?

Author's Note

waiting for reviews...

Reviews

[Shady77]

The start is really good, but the end was an anti-climax. Work on it, i would like to see an improved and extended version of this. ~peace, Shady

[anjiee]

Thanks very much for your thoughtful review... I'll work on it. :)