Raindrops

Descending from the sky like pellucid pearls,
Having the freedom to fall anywhere like the tendrils have for twirls
With a swift dispatch rider you often come,
Demonstrating to me that even small ones have the power to obscure the sun.
Sprinkling down on the emotionless crust you introduce the two separated friends,
Indoctrinating me that with a try, determination and conviction even a broken dream mends.

Refracting together you form a polychrome
Edifying me that not bars but kinfolks make a home
Leaving a petrichor behind these raindrops give a hint,
Enlightening me that a good deed always leave a footprint.
Not just a Pluviophile but these raindrops make you so much more,
All you have to do is to come out and assimilate it's impelling roar.

Author's Note

Please do leave a comment if you like the poem.
Pluviophile- a person who finds joy in raindrops.

Reviews

[Traxler]

Love when I have the chance to read a poem and actually learn something.
I loved this line the Most: "Demonstrating to me that even small ones have the power to obscure the sun."
Powerful stuff. Thanks for sharing.

[Anjeline]

Thank you you so much for such kind words. I am glad you liked it :)

[Onlyme]

A spectacular language used in this super piece. Just flows off the lips and tongue as you speak it inside your head. Great images held within. Visually pleasing, poetry inflow.

[Anjeline]

Thank you so much. I am happy that you found it good 😊

[Jade]

Love the language used in this, So very nicely written and expressed

[Anjeline]

Thanks a lot. I am glad you liked it :)

[Stella Armour]

Pluviophile, what a lovely word!
I enjoyed the lovely journey of your raindrops and the friendly thoughts they brought with them...

[Anjeline]

Thanks a lot Stella :)

[Stella Armour]

you are welcome..

[NotUsinganymore]

Lovely poetic words! I liked it a lot and I loved your comparisons!

[Anjeline]

Thank you so much. I am happy you you liked it:)

[barleygirl]

I love the word you define in your authors note . . . also "petrichor" (which sent me to google) - a perfect word for this. Your description of rain is unexpected, not only observing how it falls in tendrils & twirls (great word choices & sounds), but turning your message into philosophical pondering - startling in its freshness. Your message seems to be more about how rain makes this narrator FEEL, more than describing a rainy scene. And I always enjoy unusual perspectives. We are having a very rainy winter here, which is rare - usually dry! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Anjeline]

I am glad that you took time for my poem to find meaning of a word. Thank you so much dear Margie for giving such a kind and sweet review. Enjoy the unexpected season:-)

[¿]

It's filled with endless bliss dear Anjeline....I, without any doubts loved reading this from the start...
The detailing of falling rain drops and its capability of influencing us to do something better in bad times or to just sit calmly and enjoy the petrichor are penned with much wise words and lines....
Am a pulviophile too....just waiting for the spring to enter and then I'll enjoy every rain drop to the fullest!
Many many thanks for writing and sharing this....Be blessed :)

[Anjeline]

I am elated to read your review. Thank you so much for such sweet words. I am happy to know that you too are a pluviophille:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem Anjeline. I loved how you used the language. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Anjeline]

Thank you so much for such a sweet review. I am happy you found it good:-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome Anjeline.

[Anjeline]

....... :)

[Sawdust]

a great poem. it made my day

[Anjeline]

Thanks a lot for your kind words :)

[Chris Shaw]

I have just learned that I am a pluviophile :) Pellucid pearls, that is so nice, love saying those words and hearing them. Have you ever got soaked in the rain with a lover, walking hand in hand? If not try it. Rain is refreshing and can be exhilarating. I liked your poem. It took me to places.

Chris

[Anjeline]

Thank you so much for your review. I don't have a lover yet but I have soaked in rain a lot with my sister and friends. I am glad that you too love rain & liked the poem 😊

[Chris Shaw]

When you do take a walk in the pouring rain with them :)

[Anjeline]

Definitely :)

[Chris Shaw]

:))..............