Oh! But my carriage didn't stay

Trying to achieve our goals we sometimes forget to live life while hoping for that perfect future we never know how long is our present.

The floor is covered with snow, like release doves
Only the lichens are there holding on to the world like bolted handcuffs.
Where the snowflakes falling are as soft as fledgling,
Only the cold winds are there making a silent yelling
Oh! But my carriage didn't stay,
Just to trap me I thought a mirrage was made.
Those snow clad grounds tinted with green
Everything so beautiful as if a never ending dream
Achieved my goals, I now wished to dance, I now wished to giggle,I know wished to laugh,
Oh! But my world was torn apart, all I wished now was a moment like a apprentice needing time and a half.
I got a moment but only for realization,
All that I, moving like a train missed back on the station.
A beautiful world living in which I wished to continue
Everything so beautiful as if a dream come true
Oh! But my carriage didn't stay,
Just to trap me I thought a mirrage was made.

Author's Note

Please do leave a comment if you like the poem.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Hello Anjeline. Change stayed to stay for a better read. I envisage a train journey and the carriage flashing past some beautiful snowy scenery. Your second line is excellent, great description. Train passing too quickly means we don't have time to stop and stare at the here and now. Nicely conveyed lines.
Chris

[Anjeline]

Thanks a lot for your review Chris. I have made some changes. Hope now it's better

[Chris Shaw]

You have corrected the tense, so it reads better Anjeline.

[Anjeline]

Yes, thank you for your help and advice 😊

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome.