A star has fallen

It's a poem trying to tell you that all the powers needed to bring a change are in you. A person just needs to find those qualities.

Entangled in the shadows of darkness,
Far from the hallows of righteousness
In a hamlet full of distrust
A star has fallen on the crust.
A trouvaille so wonderful,
Turned every achromic colourful.
O ! a light so bright
Teaching every reticent to fight.

Blooming in the orb web of parochial hearts,
Extracting homology from colonial parts.
Standing stout like a pillar, supporting the tottering trust
To save us all a star has fallen amongst us.
It's name is hope, it's attribute is a desire
With determination as strong as fire
It's identity can be seen only when you are facing a cheval glass,
Yes it is you, no special to the world as the common brass
But conjuncture it that you are the trailblazer in a empire of mistrust,
And one day the palace will rise to say- a star has fallen on the crust.

Author's Note

Please do leave a comment if you like the poem.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

The things I most enjoy when reading poetry are all here: originality, thoughtful relatable meaning, & using many unexpected details to show instead of tell (first rule of good writing). Some old-timers on this website might suggest that there's no need to explain your poetry in your opening line (below title). Your meaning is easy to catch & also it's interesting to see what our readers see in our writing that we didn't plan to convey. But of course, it's a choice we all make. Your word choices are bright & fresh: "teaching every reticent to fight" . . . "tottering trust" . . . "fallen on the crust" . . . which makes your message memorable (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Anjeline]

Thank you so much for your valuable comment. I'll keep on improving 😊

[Patricia Wedel]

Because of you... I believe. x

[Chryiss]

Very nice rhymes. I typically don't like them, but when they're this well done, I thoroughly enjoy them. You employed very lovely and visual language while conveying an inspirational message that I agree with completely. It is hard to be inspirational sometimes without sounding condescending or demanding, but you accomplished the feat wonderfully. The connection to a star is darling while being fresh.

[Anjeline]

Thanks a lot for your kind words😊