Pearls from heaven...!!

So this is my description about something i love very much....!!!

Darkness of the sky ,

What does it say ?

Is it going to rain ?

Or is it in vain ?

The thick grey smoke,

Ran across the dock ,

With the anger of an athlete

To achieve a feat.

The dark doors opened 

Shattering the white pearls.

Which fell on the golden gravel

That led way for the men.

The rain pours ,

Across the lawn unexpectedly

So does death,

That snatches an intelligent's wealth .

She poured over the

mountains , fields and buildings.

The nature became happy ,

So did the God's men .

The thunder roared

The lightning stroked

The rainbow gleamed

And the men gazed.

Flowers smiled ever so sweetly

As if waiting for their lovers.

Shrubs danced ever so gracefully

As rhythmic as ballet performers .

Rainwater bubbled and

Slipped through the ground 

In a hurry to reach the bounds 

Through many and many rounds .

She flowed , carrying the touch-me-nots

That grew for no one,

To reach the unaware destination

Known by no one.

The rain pours

Across the lawns, unexpectedly

So does death , that

Snatches an intelligent's wealth.

Reviews

[AaronFreitas]

An awesome write my friend... very good work I enjoyed it :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Rain. people, well not just any people...poets use rain in poems for many things... This piece i like, and i'm adding it to my favorites. Oh... and, rating it 100#

[Happy hours]

a beautiful piece of writing....

[Jennifer Shaw]

This is a lovely, eloquently worded piece. :)

[Anjana]

Thank u :D

[Arsh]

Sounds very interesting! The flow of your rhyme makes the choice of your deep words more worth-reading. Keep it up!

[bela]

a nice poem about rain. i like these lines.

The thunder roared
The lightning stroked
The rainbow gleamed
And the men gazed.