The world is beneath my feet

I see the mirror laughing at me

or is it just me.

My shadow is leaving  

or is it just me

The roses are bleeding red

The darkness is sparkling ahead

The melody of the silence 

Slowly pervading 

The sun sank into the sea

May be it is where it is ought to be

The days are dark and

My world is at its edge

And I dont care for the rest

Somewhere it has to start 

Somehow it has to change

And Now I stand here

With the world beneath my feet

Ready for the eternal voyage

That I am yet to begin

I am moving and I am moving

I dont know where am going

Within the frontiers of the cosmos

With no limits beyond

In the eternal chariot

I set my foot

Author's Note

I honestly dont know what am writing.I selected a scene from a novel I ve been working on and wrote a poem out of it.

Reviews

[Shivai]

Oh it's beautiful! Teach me how to write a poetry like this. :')

[Anjan]

Thank You but u are very much exaggerating.

[xansizi]

To be honest this is the type of poetry that I struggle to understand and, as such, do not feel qualified to comment on. I've read your novel writing thugh and really enjoyed it

[Anjan]

Thank You for the review

[Elisa]

There's such an etherial vibe to this. I especially loved the imagery of the darkness sparkling. The imagery is so descriptive and purposeful. It shows the world that you're leaving to move onto another world beyond. Lovely poem!

[Anjan]

Thank You.I wanted to to show a mans feeling when he feels tht the world need to be changed.If one is capable of making the world better , it would be his duty to do it.

[Ankita]

wow..this is amazing :)

you write well ;D
keep up :)

[Anjan]

Thank You for the complement.

[B]

Change
I see it
The inevitable sunshine
That will change your every being
That is what i say

[Anjan]

Thoughtful and wise.Thank You