Beautiful eyes.

For some one whose eyes are just.... Beautiful.

Your eyes made mine cry.

They were as pure as a ray of light,

And as majestic as a rainbow of fright.

They touched me by all the means,

And let my tears slide.

Your eyes made mine cry.

I couldn't help but notice,

The love in your eyes.

The innocence in them,

Made me surprised,

And wonder how can one have such clueless eyes?

The one which can only love and never make others cry.

Your eyes made mine cry.

They are as pure as our love and the light,

And as it goes, the wheel of Time,

I could never forget you,

And your beautiful eyes......

Reviews

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Emotions Emotions Emotions!! I really enjoyed this poem Keep up the good work.

[Anjali]

Thank you so much!

[Desiree O'Neal]

My poor heart, this was beautiful.

[Anjali]

Haha... Thanks!

[cold_hearted77]

Aahh! Touched my soul, so beautiful i really like it.

[Anjali]

Thank you so much!!!!

[Nolan]

This is so beautiful and it all flows so well!

[Anjali]

Thank you so much!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

ah...so much of elegance this poem has...keep it up.

[Anjali]

Thanks for stopping by!

[Wajiha Nayeem]

thats always a pleasure dear.

[Nebula]

Beautiful eyes
A beautiful poem

[Anjali]

Thank you!!

[jazzymars]

wow...great!... I wonder what happened to these eyes.

[Anjali]

That's a mystery. Thank you by the way.

[jazzymars]

That's the best thing in it. It's the mystery. ;)

[Anjali]

You are absolutely right!

[mae23]

Really beautiful, I loved the repetition of the line "Your eyes made mine cry" and the wonderful emotions expressed.

[Anjali]

Thank you so much!

[Surya]

It's beautiful....I loveeeddd it..:)

[Anjali]

Haha... Thanks!😊😊

[Najam Us Saher]

How sweet...This poem was full of passion. Truly a wonderful write.

[Anjali]

Thank you!!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺